Some people think the government should pay for health care and education , but others believe it is not the government's resposiblility . Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is undeniable that

government

should afford health care and education is certainly up for debate . Not surprisingly ,some

people

believe it is

people

's own responsibility to pay these expenses. The following essay ,

however

, will outline how I am convinced that

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governments should take responsibility for

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topic. One obvious reason is that if more residents accept education,

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the crime rate will downgrade. Educating children not only raise literacy but learn from others' previous experience , in order to prevent committing

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and lower the number of victims .

In addition

, learning helps develop their cognition , and having the ability to judge right from wrong is crucial in adult life .

Moreover

, if

people

all get educated ,

then

lesser

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will happen in society . Another reason that the

government

should be responsible for health care is

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tax paying.

People

pay taxes every year , I believe parts of these should be used on them .

Last

but not least, there's wealth and poverty in every society , and the poor can't be ignored. Since they are human being living in

this

world , the

government

shouldn't give up any opportunity to assist them.

Nevertheless

, those who maintain that the

government

are excluded from these additional expenses

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suggested that the user pays rather than them . The advocates consider

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more valuable to spend on constructing or manufacturing.

Thus

,

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also

causes an unnecessary load on the

government

's

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. There might be some uneven status and feelings

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society , which

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potential social problems. By way of conclusion , it seems that whether or not the

government

should pay for health care and education is a double-edged sword . I believe there are some negative impacts if the

government

take

this

burden , but the positive aspects cannot be neglected . Hopefully ,

this

contentious issue can soon be tackled.