Fresh water has become a global concern for the world. What are the causes of it.? What measures government and individual should take to resolve the problem? Give reasons and examples for your answer

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Nowadays, there are more people around the world who worry about running out of drinkable
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. The principal causes are the excessive use of
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natural resource and the lack of resources to transform
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into freshwater. Government should take measures
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as increasing prices and educating the population.
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the excessive use of
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resource is becoming a concern in the world population. We can see many developed countries that are taking measurements at a domestic level
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increasing prices on the price of
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or another measurement like the increase in taxes. in , adding another factor is the lack of resources to develop technology to transform
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for consumption. Even though, some countries are putting into practice some measurements
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as using
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at a domestic level.
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, in bathrooms to flush the toilet or in the kitchen to wash the dishes. it is not fully implemented though
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, whether we want to see an improvement, the government will take measures which impact the pocket of the individuals having in result less waste. Like
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penalties for excessive usage or waste which the
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is known as the principal cause. on the other ,hand poor education makes it worse so introducing the topic as a subject in schools could be a long-term solution.
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if we want to see changes the authorities should take measures like putting prices up and educating the population. As well, the government should invest money in resources to transform
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into fresh
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