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The bar charts and line graph below show the results of a survey conducted over a three-year period to discover what people who live in London think of the city. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar charts and line graph below show the results of a survey conducted over a three-year period to discover what people who live in London think of the city. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two bar charts compare the changes in the opinions of Londoners about their favourite and least favourite things about living in
London
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 over a period of three years, and the line graph gives information about
residents
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' views on the main problems of the city.
It is clear that
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residents
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' perceptions of the best and worst parts of
London
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 have changed significantly in many ways over the period shown. And the problem of rubbish is generally agreed by most citizens as the biggest problem in
London
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.
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 the two bar charts, the diversity of shops, various job options and different types of people are the top three factors that attract people to
London
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,
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however
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 over time it can be seen that these attractions have declined by 2-3% each. 
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 an increasing number of
residents
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 see access to a variety of museums and art galleries and nightlife as big draws for them. For the parts of
London
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 that are least liked, complaints about living expenses, traffic congestion, occasions of crime and inconvenience of transport have decreased,
whereas
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 the high price of houses has become a major concern for Londoners. Looking at the line graph, we can see that litter is consistently considered to be the most serious problem in
London
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, with around 70% agreeing and in the second year, three-quarters of the public holding that view. Air quality and noise are
also
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 seen as major problems in
London
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 by around 65% and 57% of
residents
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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