Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts. Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.

Some
people
think that
fiction
books
have no use at all. They claim that
people
should read about real events that took place, real
people
, and established
facts
. I have to totally disagree with
this
statement. From my everyday experience and observation I can stand that
fiction
, miracles and fairy
tails
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are required in our life. For several reasons, which I will mention below, I believe that
fiction
books
play an essential role in our life. First of all, it is kind of difficult to imagine a
six year old
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child reading about politics or history with
the
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real
facts
that are not always pleasant. I think that children need miracles and Santa Claus because the real world is too complicated for them. They are too innocent and inexperienced to know the real
facts
and understand what
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real life is about.
In addition
, I am sure that making a child read only non-
fiction
books
can result in shock.
In addition
to these benefits, Second of all,
following
this
statement about refusing from reading
books
about
fiction
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events
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we
also
should refuse
from
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festivals, parades, and
celebration
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celebrations
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such
holidays
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as holidays
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as
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Halloween because most of the characters there are fictional.
Moreover
, comic
books
will disappear
as well as
animated films and
fiction
movies. The disadvantage of non-
fiction
lies in the
facts
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fact
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that nothing happens to excite the mind and spirit.
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the other side,
fiction
provides a great slope for a mind to think creatively. In conclusion, I think that
people
need miracles. We cannot be satisfied with only naked truth.
Human kind
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Humankind
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must believe in something and
this
believe
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helps
people
break limits and make new inventions.
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