With the increased global demand in Oil and Gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

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It is argued by some that,
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the increased demand for fossil fuels, left-out areas of the world should be explored. Though I agree with
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opinion, I
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disagree with it. Having said that, I will present both my views and my opinion.
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, our all
day to day
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activities
revolve
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around
energy
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. A lack of
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energy producing
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resources can negatively affect our social structure.
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, it can cause social unrest.
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, exploration of
undiscover
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undiscovered
areas is the fastest way of fulfilling the demand
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fossil fuels.
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, experts are developing natural alternative resources, but these solutions won't suffice in solving immediate pressure.
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, there are still significant amounts of supplies left that have never been excavated.
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, recent research shows that
oil
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can
suport
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support
us
up
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to 50 years and natural
gas
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up
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to 53 years.
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, there are
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some drawbacks. First and foremost, the biggest negative impact of
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and
gas
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consumption is the pollution of the environment. What is more,
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and
gas
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contribute significantly to global warming
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their large carbon footprints.
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, excavation remains part of the geography of these resources and will
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harm the ecosystem.
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, it will lead to more trees being cut down and endangered
wild life
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species above and below water.
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,
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and
gas
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won’t
last
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more than fifty years. Green
energy
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is the only solution to
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problem.
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, the United Nations has 17 sustainable goals. The seventh goal focuses on affordable clean
energy
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, and they aim to achieve it by 2030. In conclusion, the disadvantages are more significant than the advantages. Despite the fact that green
energy
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will take over fossil fuels
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slowly and gradually. It cannot be achieved overnight. With
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in mind, it is recommended that we all promote renewable
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global demand
  • finite resources
  • energy consumption
  • exploiting
  • untouched ecosystems
  • carbon emissions
  • climate change
  • renewable energy
  • sustainable energy solutions
  • geopolitical consequences
  • territorial disputes
  • dependency
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