With the increased global demand in Oil and Gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

It is argued by some that,

due to

the increased demand for fossil fuels, left-out areas of the world should be explored. Though I agree with

this

opinion, I

also

disagree with it. Having said that, I will present both my views and my opinion.

Firstly

, our all

day to day

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activities

revolve

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around

energy

. A lack of

energy producing

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resources can negatively affect our social structure.

In addition

, it can cause social unrest.

Secondly

, exploration of

undiscover

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undiscovered

areas is the fastest way of fulfilling the demand

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fossil fuels.

Moreover

, experts are developing natural alternative resources, but these solutions won't suffice in solving immediate pressure.

Finally

, there are still significant amounts of supplies left that have never been excavated.

For example

, recent research shows that

oil

can

suport

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support

us

up

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to 50 years and natural

gas

up

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to 53 years.

However

, there are

also

some drawbacks. First and foremost, the biggest negative impact of

oil

and

gas

consumption is the pollution of the environment. What is more,

oil

and

gas

contribute significantly to global warming

due to

their large carbon footprints.

Secondly

, excavation remains part of the geography of these resources and will

further

harm the ecosystem.

Moreover

, it will lead to more trees being cut down and endangered

wild life

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species above and below water.

Lastly

,

oil

and

gas

won’t

last

more than fifty years. Green

energy

is the only solution to

this

problem.

For instance

, the United Nations has 17 sustainable goals. The seventh goal focuses on affordable clean

energy

, and they aim to achieve it by 2030. In conclusion, the disadvantages are more significant than the advantages. Despite the fact that green

energy

will take over fossil fuels

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slowly and gradually. It cannot be achieved overnight. With

this

in mind, it is recommended that we all promote renewable

energy

.