Some people prefer full-time jobs because they offer stability. Other people prefer casual jobs because of the freedom they offer. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A group of
people
believe that full
-
time
jobs
give them durability,
while
others think that
part -
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part-time
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time
profession is better in terms of liberty.In my opinion, in a full
-
time
job employees ensure a bright
future
and gather a vast amount of experience.
However
, part
-
time
jobs
make
people
's
life
much more frequent and fulfil their daily dream . On the one hand, full
-
time
jobs
can assure a bright
future
for any person.
In other words
,
people
who
work
in a company as
full-
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full-time
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time
workers he or she got all the facilities .Along that with, after a
time
when they ,retire they got plenty of money as
pension
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.Which helps them to lead a happy
life
after hectic working
life
.Apart from
this
,
full -
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full-time
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time
servant gathers a huge amount of knowledge,which helps them to increase their salary and post.
For instance
, in Bangladesh government workers are promoted to higher posts for their experience and get rewarded sometimes.Paramountly, I believe that as a full
-
time
,worker they have lots of opportunities and facilities.
On the other hand
,
part-
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part-time
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time
worker has their social and personal
life
because they have no
time
limit for
work
.
As a result
, they easily do whatever they want.After their ,
work
they have enough
time
to meet with family and friends, which assists them to
work
frequently and having a good mentality.
However
, their
future
is not acceptable or
guaranty
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guarantee
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a good
life
.
Hence
, they have to
listen
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tolisten
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bad things from friends and family.
For example
, in the
,
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world
people
do lots of
part-
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part-time
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time
jobs
and
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a renown
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renown
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renowned
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job is
a
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apply
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uber ride ,where
people
give rides to passengers and earn money.Though , they earn a good amount of money and enjoy their
life
instead
of
full -
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full-time
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time
work
.Their family doesn't
agreed
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with his
work
and often they leave the family. In conclusion,full
-
time
jobs
give
people
a good
future
and a chance to lead a happy
life
after working
life
.
However
,
part -
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part-time
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time
jobs
are good for
people
who want their own
life
not to regulate by others.But their
future
is not as good as they think.
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