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The pie charts below compare the proportion of energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) in 2015 with the predictions for 2040.

The pie charts below compare the proportion of energy capacity in gigawatts (GW) in 2015 with the predictions for 2040.
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These two pie charts illustrate the comparison of energy
generation
 by using different
sources
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percentagewise
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percentages
 in 2015 and future
forecast
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forecasts
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 for 2040
,
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 and
also
 compare total capacity in gigawatts.
Overall
, fossil fuels accounted for the biggest proportion of energy
generation
 in 2015 and
according to
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forecast
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 it will have stayed the biggest segment of
power
generation
 by 2040.
Additionally
, percentages for other renewables and nuclear sources approximately will be the same in 2040, as these were in 2015.
However
, there will be a considerable increase in using of solar and wind energy in 2040.
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, total generating will double in 2040 from 6,688 GW to 11,678 GW. In 2015, fossil fuels were the primary source of
power
generation
;
however
,
its
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 number will have decreased by 20% to only 44% by 2040.
Additionally
, the figures for wind and nuclear sources
also
 will have
a
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growth to 21% and 5% respectively. As for solar
power
, there will be a remarkable increase from a modest 2% to over a quarter (18%) which will make it the
third highest
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 category.
Besides
, the figures for wind
power
 will witness a significant rise
by
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 7% to 12%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words generation, power with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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