The pie charts below give information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.

These three pie charts illustrate the percentages of
carbohydrates
, protein and fat in three different diets.
Overall
, the ratio of
carbohydrates
accounted for the largest proportion of all the diets,
whereas
the proportion of fat accounted for the least number of per cent.
Additionally
, a healthy
diet
for people who do sport has the biggest number of
carbohydrates
among other diets and the least proportion of fat, whilst an average
diet
consists of the largest part of proteins and equal per
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in fat with a healthy
diet
. Looking at the details, an average regime consists of 40% of
carbohydrates
, 20% of fat and 40% of protein, which makes it the most proteinaceous
diet
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others. The healthy
diet
has the same number of fat as the average
diet
(20%),
moreover
,
this
has 50% of
carbohydrates
and 30% of proteins, which by 10% more and less than
at
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the average
diet
respectively. As for
healthy
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diet
for sport, there are
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10% more
carbohydrates
and
by
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5%
less
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proteins and fat than in the just healthy
diet
.
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