The pie charts below give information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.
These three pie charts illustrate the percentages of
carbohydrates
, protein and fat in three different diets.
Overall
, the ratio of carbohydrates
accounted for the largest proportion of all the diets, whereas
the proportion of fat accounted for the least number of per cent. Additionally
, a healthy diet
for people who do sport has the biggest number of carbohydrates
among other diets and the least proportion of fat, whilst an average diet
consists of the largest part of proteins and equal per cents
in fat with a healthy Fix the agreement mistake
cent
diet
.
Looking at the details, an average regime consists of 40% of carbohydrates
, 20% of fat and 40% of protein, which makes it the most proteinaceous diet
from
others. The healthy Change preposition
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diet
has the same number of fat as the average diet
(20%), moreover
, this
has 50% of carbohydrates
and 30% of proteins, which by 10% more and less than at
the average Change preposition
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diet
respectively.
As for healthy
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a healthy
diet
for sport, there are by
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carbohydrates
and by
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less
proteins and fat than in the just healthy Change the quantifier
fewer
diet
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