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Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

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In today’s world, certain numbers of parents are used to purchasing for minors whatever they want, and
also
 permit them to perform their all desires. Many
people
 hold the view that
such
style
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 of parenting can lead to a poor upbringing and
a
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misbehavior
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their
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 children,
as well as
to
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too
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 big challenges for them in the future.
This
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this
 opinion and provide relevant examples. There is no doubt that
such
style
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 of parenting cannot help to raise and educate an adolescent correctly with
properly
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awareness
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 of the value of objects.
In other words
, if adults continue to give plethora
presents
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for
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young
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 person, it will lead to a pampered youth, who perceive
such
 bounties for granted, which does not require any
efforts
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.
Similarly
, it works with
personal
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 desires of the minor, because the infant does not fully understand the social rules of
behavior
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 and keeps doing inappropriate actions, without the prohibition of their parents.
For example
,
according to
 statistics
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 Psychological Moscow University, youths were raised by using
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style
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 of parenting, in most cases, become more pampered and disrespectful in relation to other
people
.
Therefore
, it is quite important to restrict the presents
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 juvenile and their desires within reason, because without that it will lead to enormous personal problems.
Secondly
, when
such
 teenagers are grown, they encounter
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vast issues in adulthood. Since, they are rather egoistic and have possessive look at
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life, which
are
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 not welcome in
modern
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 collective society.
For example
, many contemporary companies wish to employ open-minded and good-natured
people
, who will work in a team without problems and accept constructive criticism.
Thus
,
the
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poorly mannered
people
 have fewer chances to receive a well-paid job and develop
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 to work in
team
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.
Overall
,
it is clear that
permissiveness
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 of the young
people
it
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is not a good option
of
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 breeding.
Moreover
, it can lead to terrible
consequence
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 for adolescents in the future, when it necessary to find a good job.
However
, it can be prevented by limiting
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numbers
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 of presents and talking to children about proper and well-mannered
behavior
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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