Today, TV channels provide man's sport show more than women's sport show. Why? Should TV channel give equal time for women's sport and men's sport?

Today, TV channels provide man's sport show more than women's sport show. Why? Should TV channel give equal time for women's sport and men's sport?
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Nowadays, some TV channels provide
men’s
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sport
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programs
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more than
women
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’s
sport
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program because of many reasons. In my opinion, I think that television channels should divide equal attention to
show
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of both genders. There are some reasons why
men’s
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sports
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are more noticeable than that
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women
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.
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, males often have more free
time
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than females to watch TV
programs
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.
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, Vietnamese
women
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usually spend their
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to take
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care of children and family, so they do not have enough
time
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to watch television compared to their husbands.
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, some companies usually produce a lot of
men’s
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sports
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programs
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because it gets the most view and it has some advantages for them.
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may lead to the company
grow
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quickly and
make
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a lot of money. In my opinion,
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broadcaster
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should have the
same hour
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sports
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programs
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for men and
women
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. First of all, they can learn a lot of things through
sports
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program
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programs
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.
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,
women
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can do their own exercise at home through
sports
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programs
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without having to go to the
sports
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center
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, which can help them improve their health and avoid some diseases
such
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as high blood pressure, diabetes, etc.
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, publishers should have more
sports
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programs
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for
women
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so they can watch and relax after their work.
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may lead to
women
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feel
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comfortable after a tiring day. In conclusion, in
the
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modern society
of
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today, there are more
men’s
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sport
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shows than
women
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’s shows but in my opinion, I think that the broadcaster should have equal
time
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for both men and
women
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.
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