Today, TV channels provide man's sport show more than women's sport show. Why? Should TV channel give equal time for women's sport and men's sport?
Nowadays, some TV channels provide
men’s
sport
Change the noun form
sports
programs
more than women
’s sport
program because of many reasons. In my opinion, I think that television channels should divide equal attention to Change the noun form
sports
show
of both genders.
There are some reasons why Wrong verb form
shows
men’s
sports
are more noticeable than that of
Change preposition
apply
women
. Change noun form
women's
Firstly
, males often have more free time
than females to watch TV programs
. For example
, Vietnamese women
usually spend their time
to take
care of children and family, so they do not have enough Change the verb form
taking
time
to watch television compared to their husbands. Secondly
, some companies usually produce a lot of men’s
sports
programs
because it gets the most view and it has some advantages for them. This
may lead to the company grow
quickly and Wrong verb form
growing
make
a lot of money.
In my opinion, Wrong verb form
making
Add an article
the broadcaster
broadcaster
should have the Fix the agreement mistake
broadcasters
same hour
Add a hyphen
same-hour
sports
programs
for men and women
. First of all, they can learn a lot of things through sports
program
. Fix the agreement mistake
programs
For example
, women
can do their own exercise at home through sports
programs
without having to go to the sports
center
, which can help them improve their health and avoid some diseases Change the spelling
centre
such
as high blood pressure, diabetes, etc. Secondly
, publishers should have more sports
programs
for women
so they can watch and relax after their work. This
may lead to women
feel
comfortable after a tiring day.
In conclusion, in Wrong verb form
feeling
the
modern society Correct article usage
apply
of
today, there are more Change preposition
apply
men’s
sport
shows than Change the noun form
sports
women
’s shows but in my opinion, I think that the broadcaster should have equal time
for both men and women
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