You are going away from home for one week and you need to ask your neighbor to look after you house. Write a letter describe: •Why you want to go away •What you want your neighbor to look after •If there are any problems, then give instructions

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Dear Ravi I am ecstatic and elated to write

this

letter to inform you regarding my upcoming vacation for a week as I have got a special discount offer from my employer which I cannot think of it in my dream as well and I feel really blessed to have

such

a fabulous opportunity in my life. As you heard, I will be away from home for a few days and I would ask you to keep an eye on the landscape of my house since we have been hearing a lot of burglaries news despite the police random inspections.

In addition

, please check out my mailbox and collect and keep those letters safely.

Furthermore

, there will be a bike which I parked at the main gate as I do not have enough parking space inside. During my vacation, if you have experience with any unusual things at my home and please do not hesitate to call 911 to take immediate action. If they charge any additional amount everything will be on me and I will be paid back to you once I back home.

Last

but not the least, you may hear a car alarm signal if any object touches it and you need to switch it off with the key which I kept in the mailbox. Thanks in advance and I cannot thank you enough for the extended help to look after my house during my trip. Best regards Lakshmi.

Submitted by lakshma999 on Sat Feb 25 2023

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