The chart below shows percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008
The bar chart below illustrates the number of individuals that ate five portions of vegetables and fruits per day in the period between 2001 and 2008 in the UK.
Overall
,that is
clear that the women
's percentages
are the total leader in applying all periods of time.After they are men
,which almost all the time have from 20 to 28 per cent.The outsider is a children's number.The most significant year for all of them was 2004 apply when their numbers differed sharply from the next and previous years
In the apply '
beginning women
started to rise and while
children continued to be steady,men
did it too.However
,in 2003 the men
's percentage rocketed from about 17 to about 22.This
year was significant for children too,their number grew sharply and did it till 2007.Women
's percentages
carried on increasing.However
,2006 was crucial for women
,their numbers started to fall down till the end,while
men
's percentages
were stable.After 2007 all three percentages
started to decreaseSubmitted by andriykolomiyets12 on
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