"Some people believe that excelling in school is a crucial apparatus for measuring intelligence. Do you think there is a correlation between grades and intelligence? How would you define intelligence?"

"Recently, many people assumed that being excellent at school is a vital part

for

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measuring

intelligence

. But to my opinion,

however

, there is slightly a correlation between

grades

and

intelligence

. Being intelligent is shown in many various ways and not everyone can clearly see it. On the one hand, having low

grades

is

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unnecessarily

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means that an individual has

low

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IQ. It's mainly because, despite the fact that some

students

are exceptionally smart, they seem to not be able to find the fun in studying

such

subjects or areas. A student might be excelling in dancing but he is made to study policy, there is a very high probability that he will fail

such

class,

for instance

. The

grades

also

show if the teacher is doing their

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or not.

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, despite the fact that some

students

in the class still manage to achieve an A+

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their tests,

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many don't and

got

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significantly lower

grades

,

then

it's probably the teacher's responsibility to

giving

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out

such

hard tests or not

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the

students

efficiently.

Intelligence

,

on the other hand

, has a wide definition in my opinion. It can be

the

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pure

intelligence

such

as IQ, some

students

might be highly rated in subjects like math, physics and chemistry at the same time. But others could be good at literature, communication or science. The level of

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in an individual is

also

measured by

EQ

. Which is based on how each of

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act

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in a variety of situations they could meet in the future. A case in point is, if a student is having a friend who is in the blue, the one with low

EQ

might not comfort his friend,

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the one with high

EQ

would highly recommend his friend to go to an arcade,

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theme park to relax or have a talk with him to share the feelings.

In contrast

,

grades

or excelling in school isn't an efficient way of measuring

intelligence

and

intelligence

can be defined by two main categories is by IQ and

EQ

. It is

also

essential for society nowadays to acknowledge that the

intelligence

of each

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is various and can be shown in many different ways."