The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.

The amount of foreign travellers to the coast, the mountains and the lakes in a certain country in Europe over a 20 years period starting from 1987

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described in the line graph.

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, it can be clearly seen that the

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of foreign visitors to the mountainous and coastal areas in

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country witnessed an upward trend, the opposite was true for that of the lakes. In 1987, the

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of visitors who came from other nations

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travelled

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travelling

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to the coast reached

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40

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, which was doubled to the mountainous

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and trebled to the Lakes’. Over the next 12 years, the portion of foreigners visiting the mountainous area of

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European nation fluctuated dramatically

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levelled off at 35

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in the year 1999,

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the figure for

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coast

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and

lakes’

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lakes

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overseas visitors saw a remarkable climb, stabilizing at 60

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thousands

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and 50

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thousands

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thousand

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respectively

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of the period given. From 1999 onwards, the mountainous and coastal

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attracted a slightly increasing

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of tourists

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the lakes’

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of foreign travellers experienced a

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decline after hitting a peak in 2002. To be specific, the

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of overseas tourists to the lakes hit a peak at 75

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thousands

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in the year 2002 before digging sharply until the end of the time shown. Meanwhile, the coast and

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mountains

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gradually went up,

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peaking

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at 75 and 35

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thousands

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respectively in 2007, which was the highest and slowest amount among

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the three

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regions given.