The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007.
The amount of foreign travellers to the coast, the mountains and the lakes in a certain country in Europe over a 20 years period starting from 1987
is
described in the line graph.
Change the verb form
are
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the number
of foreign visitors to the mountainous and coastal areas in this
country witnessed an upward trend, the opposite was true for that of the lakes.
In 1987, the number
of visitors who came from other nations Correct pronoun usage
who travelled
travelled
to the coast reached Wrong verb form
travelling
at
40 Change preposition
apply
thousands
, which was doubled to the mountainous Change to singular
thousand
region’s
and trebled to the Lakes’. Over the next 12 years, the portion of foreigners visiting the mountainous area of Change noun form
regions
this
European nation fluctuated dramatically then
levelled off at 35 thousands
in the year 1999, Change to singular
thousand
while
the figure for coast’s
and Change noun form
coast
lakes’
overseas visitors saw a remarkable climb, stabilizing at 60 Change noun form
lakes
thousands
and 50 Change to singular
thousand
thousands
respectively Change to singular
thousand
at the end
of the period given.
From 1999 onwards, the mountainous and coastal region
attracted a slightly increasing Fix the agreement mistake
regions
number
of tourists whereas
the lakes’ number
of foreign travellers experienced a substantially
decline after hitting a peak in 2002. To be specific, the Change the adverb
substantial
amount
of overseas tourists to the lakes hit a peak at 75 Change the quantifier
number
thousands
in the year 2002 before digging sharply until the end of the time shown. Meanwhile, the coast and Change to singular
thousand
mountain’s
gradually went up, Change noun form
mountains
peaked
at 75 and 35 Wrong verb form
peaking
thousands
respectively in 2007, which was the highest and slowest amount among Change to singular
thousand
three
regions given.Correct article usage
the three
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