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Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?

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Some people believe that
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children
’s should attend
school
 from an early
age
. Others argue and consider unnecessary pressure on their
development
. It’s been observed that
the
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young
children
 who are going through their
development
 phase are not sensible enough to understand the activities in their surroundings. Sending them to
school
 will not be
justifiable
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 as it would put unnecessary pressure on them. To illustrate
this
further
,
School
children
’s who are older in
age
 group
found
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 much
responsive
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 in activities as compared to the young ones.
On the contrary
, if young
children
 at
school
not
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 able to cope with their studies and understand the basic concept
than
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 it may lead to a catastrophic situation for their future life because they will not be able to grasp the advanced concepts. The process of neurological
development
 at a young
age
 is considered a critical process where
children
’s learning ability is far more as compared to the adult
age
.
For example
, those students who are exposed to multiple languages at
the
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 young
age
 become very proficient in a very short span as compared to learning the language
at
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 their teenage. Most importantly, In case of any disability in
children
 in terms of psychological and physical can be addressed at a very young
age
 because in
school
children
 will go through a series of evaluations.
For example
, those
children
 who are short-tempered or face difficulty in speaking get therapies from
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 psychiatrist and
hence
 their disabilities may not come as an obstacle
for
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 their upcoming life. In Conclusion, now
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 days role of schools is becoming very crucial in terms of
children
’s nourishment and evaluation because young
children
requires
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 evaluators with contemporary skills for their
development
.
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