In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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, the Correct the word
Nowadays
people
who buy printed newspapers or books have decreased because of the development of technology, so Correct quantifier usage
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people
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then
on the Correct your spelling
them
internet
.
I agree Capitalize word
Internet
to
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with
this
statement that people
will not buy printed things because of some reasons. First,
read on online has many benefits than read on printed objects. For example
, we can reduce spent
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spending
read
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reading
with
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for
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the internet
internet
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also
some are more
cheaper than printed. And Change the word
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the internet
internet
is more comfortable. We can read books anywhere on the Capitalize word
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internet
without packing Capitalize word
Internet
book
. And Fix the agreement mistake
books
also
we do not have to go bookstore
to buy Change preposition
to bookstore
book
.
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books
Second,
almost
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most
people
want to be able to do everything on the internet
. The evidence recently our lives pattern changed since before. Capitalize word
Internet
For example
, in the past
we had to go shop when we need something we want like clothes. And we have to go restaurant if we want to eat something which we can not make Add a comma
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in house
. Add a hyphen
in-house
However
now we have many Add a comma
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internet
sites for the clothes so we can buy it on the internet
. And also
we can order many kinds of food very easily.
In conclusion, read
online has many advantages and Wrong verb form
reading
people
want to do everything on
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apply
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online. because of those reasons in the future Correct article usage
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people
who buy printed things will become fewer and then
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