Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment ? What can be done by individuals and government to solve this problem ?

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, the environment is very awful. One more thing that makes the surrounding problem around the
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is
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,
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,
plastic
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bags,
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bottles and
plastic
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packaging. In
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essay, I will discuss how
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destroys the environment and how to solve
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problem by people and government. First of all,
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are hard to decompose. And the
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are increasing
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every year
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as in Asian countries the percentage of
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plastics
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very higher than
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year. Oceans have many
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are
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very dangerous for animals.
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,
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is easy to
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and makes life easier. Many shops
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plastics
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because it is very easy to
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and cheap.
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, government and humans can help with
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problem
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, the government can get taxes from
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manufacturers and give policies to reduce
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.
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, people can help the
world
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likes using products
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from
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nature
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as cotton bags, recycle bottles and
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use
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nature packaging.
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, I strongly believe that
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plastics
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products affected the environment,
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the
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global warming around the
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,
and
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the trouble in the river and the bad weather around the
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and
also
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climate change.
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