People nowadays tend to have children at older ages.

Families do not sit in a place at the
table
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these days. There are positive and negative sides to
this
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issue. And I would like to write the reason for
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this
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these
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questions
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in my essay. I would like to start on
a
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the
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positive side,
sit
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down at the evening
table
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around my family.
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, a person can talk or tell how he went today or can tell all his problems that have been preserved in his soul.
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, after a hard
day
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or after a course, I will sit down at the
table
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with my family and tell
how
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them how
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my
day
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went and talk about my successes.
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, we can have a delicious meal during
dinner
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after a hard
day
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or after school.
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, students or workers cannot take their
day
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off from work and do not eat all
day
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long. Now I would like to move on to the negative part of
this
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question. Many seven cannot have
dinner
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together for various reasons.
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, people do not have
dinner
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or breakfast because there is no time.
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, schoolchildren do not sit at the
table
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in the morning because they get up late.
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, they do not sit together because
quarrels
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of quarrels
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.
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, in Western countries, by statistics 43.8 per cent of people do not have
dinner
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together after a quarrel. Taking everything into consideration,
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apply
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in the
end
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I wanted to write many families do not eat
dinner
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together and would advise them to eat together in the circle of their families.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • delayed parenting
  • maternal/paternal age
  • biological clock
  • career establishment
  • financial stability
  • physical stamina
  • emotional maturity
  • health risks
  • generation gap
  • work-life balance
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