Your child is going on a 3 day international schooltrip .Head teacher wants to find out if parents are interested in joining.write a letter say why you would like to go suggest what you can do to help ask other questions about the trip

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Dear Madam, I am the mother of one of your students' Aimen and I am writing

this

letter to inform you in response to your letter that I will prefer to go with my daughter on the school trip.

Last

week, I got your letter about your class trip to the hilly area. My child is very excited to go as

this

will be her first time experiencing hiking. Your class strength is above 15 students and you will be needing as many assistants as possible for the student's care. I would like to join because I am an expert at hiking and can give you valuable tips to cross steep mountainous areas. One more thing which I have to ask is whether the hiking sticks will be available at the destination or do we have to bring our own?

Besides

this

I am interested to know about the total expenses for

this

tour. I was wondering if you could get me updated on

this

information. Yours sincerely, Sana.

Submitted by drsanaghani on Sun Feb 26 2023

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Your child is going on a 3 day international schooltrip .Head teacher wants to find out if parents are interested in joining.write a letter say why you would like to go suggest what you can do to help ask other questions about the trip

some people think that men and women have different qualities, therefore certain jos are suitable for men and others for women. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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