The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

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the import
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of
tea
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and
coffee
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to
Canada
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, the US, the
UK
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and
Germany
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.
Overall
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, the
UK
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buy the most amount of
tea
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compared to other countries,
whereas
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in
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Germany
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was imported the biggest amount of
coffee
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. Another point that should
also
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be highlighted is that
Canada
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and the US practically had the same proportion of imported goods. Looking at the details, the
UK
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was the first highest buyer of
tea
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among other countries and purchased 80000
tonnes
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of
tea
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, whilst
Germany
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bought
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it by
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by
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double-less (about 40000
tonnes
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). As for
Canada
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and the US, they purchased about 20000
tonnes
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both
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. Meanwhile,
Germany
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acquired 50000
tonnes
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of
coffee
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and became the biggest importer in comparison to other countries. At the same time,
Canada
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and US bought
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10000
tonnes
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less, at about 40000. As for
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UK
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the UK
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, despite the fact that the
UK
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purchased the largest amount of
tea
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,
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whereas
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the
UK
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acquired the least significant part of
coffee
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, with just 30000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, canada, uk, germany, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • import volumes
  • significant similarities or differences
  • trends
  • analyze
  • encapsulate
  • main findings
  • comparison
  • notably
  • illustrates
  • respective countries
  • amounts imported
  • tea imports
  • coffee imports
  • hints at underlying factors
  • proportion
  • per capita consumption
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