The graph below shows the amount of tea and coffee imported by four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main points and make comparisons where relevant.

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import
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the import
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of
tea
and
coffee
to
Canada
, the US, the
UK
and
Germany
.
Overall
, the
UK
buy the most amount of
tea
compared to other countries,
whereas
in
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Germany
was imported the biggest amount of
coffee
. Another point that should
also
be highlighted is that
Canada
and the US practically had the same proportion of imported goods. Looking at the details, the
UK
was the first highest buyer of
tea
among other countries and purchased 80000
tonnes
of
tea
, whilst
Germany
bought
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by
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double-less (about 40000
tonnes
). As for
Canada
and the US, they purchased about 20000
tonnes
both
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. Meanwhile,
Germany
acquired 50000
tonnes
of
coffee
and became the biggest importer in comparison to other countries. At the same time,
Canada
and US bought
by
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10000
tonnes
less, at about 40000. As for
UK
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the UK
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, despite the fact that the
UK
purchased the largest amount of
tea
,
whereas
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the
UK
acquired the least significant part of
coffee
, with just 30000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Vocabulary: Replace the words tea, coffee, canada, uk, germany, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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