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Your friend has asked you to help him/her to find a music teacher for his/her child. Write a letter to your friend that you have found a suitable teacher. In your letter, you should tell: what experience the teacher has why you think he/she is suitable how to get in touch with the teacher. write 150 words

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Dear Thomas, I am writing, to inform you that I already found a
music
 teacher for your
child
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music
 lesson, I know
this
 teacher can help your child very well. The
teachers
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 name is Jhon Dela Cruz, is a very
well known
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 and
respective
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 tutor in the
music
 industry.But before he
become
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 a
music
 teacher he is a performer
in
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on
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 piano, he already
perform
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many
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 countries,
such
 as Brazil, Singapore and some country in Southeast Asia.
In
addition
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 he is
also
 a very good guitarist
of
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hes
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his
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 band before. I believe your son Andre can learn very fast
on
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apply
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how to play the piano and even
guitar
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the guitar
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 because
this
 guy is a very good tutor. You can contact him every morning
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from monday
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monday
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 to
friday
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 or you can go directly to your place after office hours. he is always available. Looking forward to hearing from you very soon. Kind Regards. Rubenel
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