It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of media. What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media-rich society.

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ongoing all over the world,
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variety of information can be
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huge social data
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connection.
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and
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of
media
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provided in
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paragraphs. During
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people
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status happening and only
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to get information to stud. Currently, technology become forwarded,
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form of source has been crossing all over the cities.
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media
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consistes
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scenario happened within a seconds. These pages could help the persons who were preparing for UPSC exams.
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,
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some Television
channel
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like Suvara news,
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continously
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the updates with detailed
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to be useful
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voluntarily
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the public set of apps where
inorder
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to get more likes and support unnecessarily
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fake important news like famous celebrities
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due to
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and sharing without any seriousness. Many
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have to face the consequences
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media
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. Unknowingly, it would impact the professional life
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people
. Some national
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will create small
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man
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stolen
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gold but later reporter created as murder.
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infuence
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influence
of
media
create major drawbacks. In summary, every source of
media
has its own use and misuse but depends on how
people
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it. In general, I found more
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at present status
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Information on Demand
  • Educational Opportunities
  • Cultural Exchange
  • Enhanced Communication
  • Information Overload
  • Echo Chambers
  • Privacy Concerns
  • Mental Health Impact
  • instant access
  • lifelong learning
  • skill development
  • intercultural dialogue
  • media platforms
  • data breaches
  • intrusive advertising
  • excessive media consumption
  • online interactions
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