Robots‌ ‌can‌ ‌free‌ ‌people‌ ‌from‌ ‌difficult‌ ‌and‌ ‌dangerous‌ ‌work.‌ ‌However,‌ ‌some‌ ‌people‌ ‌are‌ ‌worried‌ ‌about‌ ‌the‌ ‌possible‌ ‌dangers‌ ‌robots‌ ‌may‌ ‌create. ‌‌Discuss‌ ‌the‌ ‌benefits‌‌ ‌of‌ ‌using‌ ‌robots‌ ‌and‌ ‌the‌ ‌‌possible‌ ‌dangers‌‌ ‌from‌ ‌it.‌ ‌

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Robots
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are now used in all
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industries across the globe. They can provide ease
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create some significant dangers. In
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put forward the possible dangers which they may create. To commence with, people believe that there are numerous benefits of using
robots
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as they make tasks easy for them. These machines can be helpful in managing numbers and they can be used for risky and life
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jobs. To illustrate, in my country almost all the car manufacturers use
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in their paint
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. Car
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is a difficult job and requires precision,
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job accurately.
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many disadvantages
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using
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as they can be quite dangerous. They need to be operated under supervision.
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years ago there was a major accident in a factory in our city and a person died. The incident was
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a robot as it did not stop and a person's head was smashed. In conclusion,
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technology can be a blessing and a curse. It really depends on the user and it should be monitored all the time. Industries should make sure to use it wisely and all the staff should be trained
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Word Count

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Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • monotonous tasks
  • intellectually stimulating
  • hazardous environments
  • job displacement
  • economic output
  • lower-skilled workers
  • dependency
  • critical skills
  • ethical concerns
  • security concerns
  • unlawful purposes
  • dilemmas
  • autonomous vehicles
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