the two maps below show an island before and after construction of some tourist facilities.

the two maps below show an island before and after construction of some tourist facilities.
The given picture illustrates two different versions of maps of an
island
, the first one
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its
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natural map, and the second one emerges its modification for tourist facilities.
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, there are two maps with scales of 100 meters with details
wich
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allow us to
familiar
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with
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ourselves with
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its new fantastic design.
Firstly
, a precise observer can specify that there are some palm trees
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the
island
that
maintained
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natural beauty of
land
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and in the
west
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we can locate
a shallow water suits
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a shallow water suit
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for lovers of swimming.
on the other hand
,
architectures
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and engineers
hade
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made facilities for visitors as much as their
creativity's
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and native of
island
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the island
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let them
to
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build. There is a restaurant near the beach with a view
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sea
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the sea
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and
cozy
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tents for
accomodation
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accommodation
in the middle of
island
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the island
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.
Construction
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team have made a tiny pier to draw
attention
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of sailing and fishing fans. In conclusion, substantial changes are obvious, which had made the
island
a nice target for site seeing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • island
  • before and after
  • construction
  • tourist facilities
  • maps
  • changes
  • comparison
  • description
  • implications
  • personal opinion
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