the two maps below show an island before and after construction of some tourist facilities.
The given picture illustrates two different versions of maps of an
island
, the first one Use synonyms
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is its
its
natural map, and the second one emerges its modification for tourist facilities. Correct your spelling
is
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, there are two maps with scales of 100 meters with details Linking Words
wich
allow us to Correct your spelling
which
familiar
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familiarise
with
its new fantastic design.
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ourselves with
Firstly
, a precise observer can specify that there are some palm trees Linking Words
in
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on
island
that Use synonyms
maintained
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are maintained
as
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apply
a
natural beauty of Remove the article
apply
land
and in the Add an article
the land
west
we can locate Add a comma
,west
a shallow water suits
for lovers of swimming.
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a shallow water suit
shallow water suits
on the other hand
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architectures
and engineers Replace the word
architects
hade
made facilities for visitors as much as their Correct your spelling
had
creativity's
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creativity
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island
let them Correct article usage
the island
to
build. There is a restaurant near the beach with a view Change the verb form
apply
to
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of
sea
and Add an article
the sea
cozy
tents for Change the spelling
cosy
accomodation
in the middle of Correct your spelling
accommodation
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island
. Add an article
the island
Construction
team have made a tiny pier to draw Add an article
The construction
attention
of sailing and fishing fans.
In conclusion, substantial changes are obvious, which had made the Add an article
the attention
island
a nice target for site seeing.Use synonyms
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