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Some people believe that using taxpayer funds to look for life on other planets is important. Others, however, think that it is a waste of public money because there are much more important issues requiring funding on our own planet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Every Individual who earns is supposed to pay taxes in almost all Countries. It is a hotly debated topic that uses
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 public tax money in order to explore
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 on another planet.
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 others contradict it by saying there are much more prominent issues to be looked after on our globe. Primarily, There are many rural or say undeveloped areas where people still face no means of transportation problems which is imminent for every household.
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, the Amreli district of Gujarat state has
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 impoverished roads that there is no public transit. People use bullock carts and bicycles as means of transport. Women still take a walk for day-to-day day chores. Secondarily, In the present era, the state of Rajasthan has some cities which do not even have proper sanitary service.
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, In ABP news it is
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 that ladies have to walk a mile at least to go in the bushes to poop.
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 flies hover over the remains of the excreta and spread it over the snack hawkers on the roadside which leads to diseases in people. On the other side,
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 the increasing population and global warming,the earth seems to be becoming inhabitable slowly and it is
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 essential
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 the evidence of
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 in other spheres
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 early. For evidence, Nikola Tesla has launched multi-million dollar space programs to find evidence of
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 on other planets.
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, I believe it is important to search for
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 on another globe.
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, the day to day
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 issues
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 as electricity, sanitation etc are crucial to be dealt with as a priority.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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