The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart compares how many social media
sites
were used by Canadians in 2014 and 2015.
It is clear that
in 2014, more
people
used at most one internet site,
while
in 2015, an increasing number of
people
using
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more than
two
sites
for online surfing. 2014 saw 36% of Canadian inhabitants using only one website,
however
,
this
figure dropped significantly in 2015, by 8%.
This
was followed by 23 % who had
two
social networking
sites
as well as
22 % who did not use them at all. In 2014, less than 20% of
people
used three or more websites in total. An
overall
increase in the proportion of
people
using more than
two
websites could be seen in 2015. It is quite noticeable that the percentage of
people
using three social networking
sites
rose to 16%, compared to 12% in 2014. There were
also
rises of about 2% of the population using
two
, four and five
sites
.
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