Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
People
have different opinions regarding education Use synonyms
nowdays
. Even though some of them consider that students should Correct the word
nowadays
chose
their path Change the verb form
choose
according
the needs of society, I disagree with that opinion. From my point of view, everyone should have an opportunity to choose their profession.
The job that we decide to do when we chose university will be Add the preposition
toaccording
great
part of our life for a very long timeAdd an article
a great
,
since Remove the comma
apply
people
usually get retired after 30 or 40 years of work. Use synonyms
People
have different interests and some of them are better in certain fields and disciplines than Use synonyms
the
others, so Correct article usage
apply
for instance
, I am much better Linking Words
in
natural sciences than languages, Change preposition
at
while
my best friend had huge difficulties with Linking Words
the
math and chemistry, but she still managed to learn how to fluently speak 4 languages. Both of us chose our jobs Correct article usage
apply
according
our abilities and prons and we are doing them very well, Add the preposition
toaccording
while
I am not sure if we would be able to do the same if we chose the professions that we did not likeLinking Words
,
or some Remove the comma
apply
disciplins
that we were very bad at.
Correct your spelling
disciplines
discipline
On the other hand
, we are all part of society, so we need to contribute to the societies needs with our work, Linking Words
therefore
some Linking Words
people
think that students should Use synonyms
chose
the profession that will be Change the verb form
choose
usuful
for everyone in the future, no matter Correct your spelling
useful
of
their preferences. Except that, Change preposition
apply
people
that chose Use synonyms
their
careers in Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
technology and science and Correct article usage
apply
the
other similar fields that will probably become very popular, have Correct article usage
apply
better
chance to earn Add an article
a better
good
Add an article
a good
salary
and gain financial stability faster than the Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
people
that chose unpopular professions.
In conclusion, even though some professions will be of Use synonyms
the
greater use in the future and can bring more benefit to Correct article usage
apply
the
both, individuals and society, one should Correct article usage
apply
chose
Change the verb form
choose
career
Correct article usage
a career
according
her own wishes and abilities, so she will be able to achieve her highest potential doing that job.Add the preposition
toaccording
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