The charts show the information about internet usage in five countries in Europe in 2000.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of
internet
users
in 5 different countries in 2000, while
the pie chart shows the average amount of money spent on shopping online per person.
Overall
, Sweden and Uk were the two countries with the greatest proportion of internet
users
, and also
the two countries with the highest online shopping expense. In addition
, Spain has the fewest internet
users
and the lowest average spending on internet
shopping.
In 2000, 35% of the Swedish population used the Add an article
the internet
internet
, while
20% of Brits were also
internet
users
. Only 5% of people in Spain used the internet
, which was half of the figure for France (10%), and one-third of the figure for Germany (15%).
British internet
users
had the highest average shopping expenses online, at €87, followed by the Swedes, at €76. The French and Germans had similar average internet
budgets, at €57 and €46 respectively, while
the Spanish only spent a mere average of €10 on online shopping.Submitted by bobong120906 on
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