The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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A glance at the pie chart provided reveals
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the major
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that lead to
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degradation
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the table depicts how these
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3 parts of the world in1990s. As it is clear,over-grazing,first of all, is the biggest
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of
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degradation
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with 35%
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worldwide.
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,deforestation and over-cultivation are
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main
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problems in these countries with
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respectively in
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America,Europe and Oceania.
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has
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to other
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for
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. One particular point that
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by the figure is that,among
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nations,Europe had the greatest proportion of
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degradation
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land
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,at 23
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.And
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factor was not over-grazing but deforestation with 9.8
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,in Oceania with a total of 13%
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its
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.And over-grazing in Oceania is the biggest element of
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with 11.3% .North America had less influence by
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in
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with a total of 5
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words reasons, land, degradation, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Pie chart
  • Table
  • Main features
  • Comparisons
  • Decreasing productivity
  • Reasons
  • Regional variations
  • Data
  • Summarize
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