The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2018, and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2018, and future projections for 2025.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart below shows information about the worldwide sales of 4 different game categories comprised of mobile phones, online, console, and handheld
games
between 2000-2006.
Overall
, it can be seen from the chart that in 2000, the worldwide sales had 2 types of
games
, console, and handheld
games
until 2002 there had 2 more types of new
games
mobile phone
games
and online
games
.
Although
two types of
games
appeared, handheld
games
remain taken the most worldwide sale throughout the given period. In 2000, the figure
of
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for
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the worldwide sold
games
was taken by console and handheld approximately 6 billion
dollar
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dollars
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and 11 billion
dollar
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dollars
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respectively. Apparently, the sale of handheld moderately grows over the period between 2000-2006,
while
the console
games
had a contrasting trend, decreasing continually until taking the lowest
at the end
of the period. The worldwide sale of both new
games
was exceed console
games
in the year 2005, and both were steady increase since they were launched in 2001 for 2006.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words games with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • exports
  • trends
  • projections
  • categories
  • international tourism
  • dairy products
  • meat products
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant
  • analyze
  • highlight
  • summarize
  • main features
  • comparisons
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