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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without any payment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

#future #nobody #newspapers #books #payment
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 nobody will buy
printed
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newspaper
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newspapers
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 or books because they will be able to read
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everything
 they want online without any payment.
This
 topic has become an integral part of the rising debate in the present world.
while
 proponents of the argument are in favour.
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 the opponents are completely against the relevance of
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e-books
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.In my
opinion
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 e-books have more positive impacts than negatives around the globe. To commence with there are a number of arguments in
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favour
 of my belief the most prominent word is that
the
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it is more fruitful than paper books as they can save
ones
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 valuable time.
According to
 research conducted by Western Sydney
University
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 anyone can read
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a newspaper
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newspaper
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newspapers
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 or
book
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books
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 from anywhere, they do not need to go to the library on any other public
places
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place
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.
Secondly
, e-books can carry millions of articles which are free to read.
Moreover
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, critics may point out that one of the most significant disadvantages of
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online portals is that
it
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 might be affected
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the eyes because of the high lighting system of gadgets.
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instance
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 a survey conducted in
united
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the united
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 states reveals that
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 of more gadgets
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main
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 reason for eye problems.
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online
portal
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 various kinds of people
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 so many things and their opinion might not be
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as a result
 one can not take
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 decision
in
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 a particular subject.
To conclude
, when even
there
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 are a lot of demerits associated with the topic the advantages outweigh the disadvantages and online
e-book
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e-books
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 become a crucial part of our life,
therefore
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e-books
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 should be promoted,
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it's misuses
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 should be condemned.
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