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“ You are looking for a part-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter: introduce yourself explain what sort of job you would like and say what experience and skills you have

#job #employment #agency #sort #skills
Dear, Sir or madam I am writing to you regard to a job
position
 in the construction industry. My name is Gonzalo Ezequiel Fuentes I am a qualified carpenter and landscaper based on the Gold Coast with more than 10 years of experience in
this
 area. I would like to explain why I am looking for a job. I have been working for a company called Worthy building structural Playgrounds which was a job exposed to the sun all the time. as consequence, I got my skin damaged so my doctor has recommended that start looking for an undercover
position
. So I would like to find and shop-fitting
position
 that I know is most of the time on the shade. As I mentioned before I have a lot of experience working on tools,
as well as
, handling hardwood and really good attention to detail which is key for
this
position
. I look forward to hearing back from you. faithfully. Gonzalo Fuentes.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
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