Some people think that government should provide funds to the sportsman while other opine that private institutions should support them. Do you agree or disagree

There is no denying the fact that the main impact of

sports

on the

country

is arguable.

While

it is a commonly held belief that

sports

competition

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have a positive impact on society,

therefore

government

must fund

sportsman

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.

However

, others argue that it should not be covered by the

authority

, and it must be funded by

the

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special foundation. From my perspective, I strongly believe that

government

must supports and funds sportspeople as they represent the

country

in

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international competition.

This

essay will shed a light upon the reasons why I believe in

this

statement. On one hand, funding

sports

individuals may increase

country's

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popularity and recognition internationally,

therefore

people who participate in

the

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such

competitions must be funded by the

authority

.

For instance

, a

country

such

as Brazil is a well-known

country

for winning the football cup. To illustrate, when an international challenge happens,

players

are reflecting their cultures, beliefs, traditions and views.

As a result

,

players

must be supported economically by the

authority

as they are representing the

country

internationally. Indeed,

this

makes it clear that the

government

must support

sports

players

financially.

Moreover

, by emboldening the

sports

players

financially, the

government

may help them psychologically.

For example

, when people knew that their

country

spends money on them in order to achieve success, they will feel

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responsibility toward their

country

and as

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they will show appreciation for their

country

.

Furthermore

,

such

support may help in increasing bonding

players

with their own

country

.

Thus

, it becomes apparent that funding the

sports

players

with the

government

may help them psychologically in increasing

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their bonding

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with their

country

. In conclusion, the

authority

must understand the importance of funding

sports

players

and supporting them financially, as they present the nations in important international competitions. In my opinion, I consider that

government

must support

players

financially.

This

is because the

country

could be recognized internationally because of them.