There should be strict laws banning people from taking photographs of people under '18 in order to protect young celebrities and the children of celebrities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
All
children
have the right to a normal childhood. Use synonyms
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, everyone is interested in child stars and the Linking Words
children
of celebrities. Use synonyms
Overall
, I agree that it is more important to protect Linking Words
children
, so we should not allow Use synonyms
people
to take photographs of Use synonyms
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under 18. It is true that Use synonyms
people
are interested in seeing photos of famous Use synonyms
children
. They want to see if they look like their celebrity parents. The Beckham Use synonyms
children
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for example
, are often in the newspapers. Linking Words
People
think the Beckham boys should play football like their father. The little girl has to be perfectly dressed like her mother. In my opinion, Use synonyms
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the children
people
believe they have the right to see pictures of famous Use synonyms
children
, particularly important ones like those of the British royal family. Prince William is working hard to make sure his Use synonyms
children
, Prince George and Princess Charlotte, can grow up with their privacy protected. Use synonyms
People
say that 'fame has a price'. They think that if photographers take pictures of well-known Use synonyms
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that is
part of the price. I disagree with Linking Words
children
'paying for fame'. They didn't choose to be famous. They have the right to be badly dressed or have a bad day like everyone else. I once saw a website called 'Celebrities with Use synonyms
ugly kids
'. How will those Correct your spelling
Ugly Kids
children
feel when they see that website one day? In conclusion, I understand that photos of famous Use synonyms
children
sell newspapers. Use synonyms
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, I think Linking Words
such
photos should be banned to protect the Linking Words
children
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