It is believed by some that people should take yearly driving test to ensure safety on the roads, while others do not agree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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the amount of
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most of it for
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, industrial uses take 48% and 53% of
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asia
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agriculture is the most
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area
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where it takes 88
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in
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central
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,84% in
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