Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or diagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

These days,one of the most controversial issues around the world is traffic congestion.And every

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try to tackle

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this

issue.Meanwhile,some believe increasing

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the price of petrol is

good

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idea to reduce the volume of traffic

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.I can neither completely agree nor disagree with

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statement.In

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I will discuss both views and I will give some possible

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to solve the problem. On the one hand,increasing

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the price of petrol can reduce the amount of traffic

as well as

air and noise pollution.The reason is that,in

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case,

people

prefer

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use

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their car in some emergency cases to save

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money

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.and they persuade to use public

transportation

instead

of their private car.Especially in short distances.

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,there are some negative factors for

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the amount

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of petrol or gasoline price.

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,it directly can harm many jobs or

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.

such

as taxi drivers or

transportation

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factories force to enhance the amount of their material to make amends for their damages.and it can affect peoples

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and they have to work more and endure more pressure to gain money to buy some products. And

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the commuter

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,

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should pay more money for travel to their workplace

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. In order to solve

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problem,first of all,

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duties should not be taken lightly.Authorities

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of their

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to legislate boost or prepare facilities can help to tackle

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this

problem,

for

example

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they should improve the condition of public

transportation

and make them more convenient to encourage

people

to utilize public

transportation

.Authorities should enhance

peoples

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awareness about the importance of our environment and air pollution to

encorage

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encourage

them to use

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or bus

instead

of using

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car

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.

To sum up

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of

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this

vital issue,

people

also

should take

an even simple steps

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.I believe with

cooperation

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the cooperation

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of

people

and government we can gain the desired result.