Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or diagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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These days,one of the most controversial issues around the world is traffic congestion.And every
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issue.Meanwhile,some believe increasing
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the price of petrol is
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idea to reduce the volume of traffic
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.I can neither completely agree nor disagree with
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I will discuss both views and I will give some possible
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to solve the problem. On the one hand,increasing
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the price of petrol can reduce the amount of traffic
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air and noise pollution.The reason is that,in
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their car in some emergency cases to save
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.and they persuade to use public
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of their private car.Especially in short distances.
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,there are some negative factors for
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of petrol or gasoline price.
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,it directly can harm many jobs or
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factories force to enhance the amount of their material to make amends for their damages.and it can affect peoples
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and they have to work more and endure more pressure to gain money to buy some products. And
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should pay more money for travel to their workplace
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. In order to solve
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problem,first of all,
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duties should not be taken lightly.Authorities
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to legislate boost or prepare facilities can help to tackle
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problem,
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they should improve the condition of public
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and make them more convenient to encourage
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to utilize public
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.Authorities should enhance
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awareness about the importance of our environment and air pollution to
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encourage
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or bus
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of using
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should take
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.I believe with
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of
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and government we can gain the desired result.
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