Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or diagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
These days,one of the most controversial issues around the world is traffic congestion.And every
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as well as
air and noise pollution.The reason is that,in Linking Words
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instead
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On the other hand
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the rising
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amount
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the amount
For example
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such
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for some factories or companies,in Use synonyms
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factories force to enhance the amount of their material to make amends for their damages.and it can affect peoples Add the comma(s)
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life
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they
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governments
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and make them more convenient to encourage Use synonyms
people
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.Authorities should enhance Use synonyms
peoples
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encorage
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encourage
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the subway
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a private
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also
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even simple steps
an even simple step
cooperation
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the cooperation
people
and government we can gain the desired result.Use synonyms
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