The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
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The pie graphs show the main reasons (social networking, email, digital camera and phone calls) why teenagers use their phones in one African country between 2016 and 2019.
Although
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a slight decline in 2017, social media usage was by far the major cause of why teenagers use their mobile phones. In 2019 it end up with a 6% rise when compared to 2016. On one hand, digital cameras remained steady at
first,
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however
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, in 2018 it has had substantial growth.
On the other hand
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, calls have increased by 3% between 2016 and 2017, albeit in 2019 plummeted, representing only 5%.
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, the phone call was the least chosen reason in the time frame given by the chart.
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, emails showed a slump of 6% between 2016 and 2019. In conclusion, the result of the survey was the following, the podium went to social networking, followed by the digital camera, email and calls, respectively.
This
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represents that teenagers do not use their phones anymore for calling.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • noticeable shift
  • communication preferences
  • considerably declined
  • functionalities
  • reflecting global trends
  • emerging trend
  • educational use of technology
  • diversification
  • traditional communication
  • digital forms of communication
  • instant messaging
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