The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The bar chart below illustrates the frequency of American
people
who liked to eat in fast Use synonyms
food
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restaurant
during the Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
years
2003 and 2013.
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Overall
, the number of times that American Linking Words
people
went Use synonyms
to
fast Replace the word
too
food
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reastaurants
Correct your spelling
restaurants
were
the highest Correct subject-verb agreement
was
in
once a week in 2006, and twice a month in 2013. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, the least per cent Linking Words
in
eating junk Change preposition
of
food
was Use synonyms
on
Change preposition
apply
everyday
Replace the word
every day
among
the Change preposition
over
years
.
In Use synonyms
USA
the number of Correct article usage
the USA
people
who Use synonyms
prefered
to eat fast Correct your spelling
prefer
food
both once a week and twice a month Use synonyms
were
the same per cent Change the verb form
was
with
30% in 2003. Change preposition
at
In addition
, the Linking Words
propotion
was very low in the number of Correct your spelling
proportion
promotion
people
who enjoyed eating fast Use synonyms
food
with 5% and less. Use synonyms
Also
, less Linking Words
Linking Words
then
4% of Replace the word
than
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people
frequency was on Change noun form
people's
everyday
in 2003, and 3% in the Replace the word
every day
years
2006, and 2013. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
American
who went a few times have the same per cent in both Fix the agreement mistake
Americans
years
2006 and 2013 with 15%.Use synonyms
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