The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal.

The diagram below shows how energy is produced from coal.
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The diagram illustrates the way of producing electricity from coal in the special factory.
Overall
, it is a linear
process
consisting of some stages: starting with delivering coal to the furnace, to producing energy from
syngas
and
steam
.
To begin
with, once, coal has been transferred to a furnace, it is
then
mixed with oxygen to start the
process
of burning.
Following
this
, there produces raw
syngas
and slag which doesn’t participate in the future
process
. When, raw
syngas
has been purified in
a
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removal from impurities,
such
as CO2 and mercury sulfur, it is delivered to a gas turbine to generate
first
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electricity. In the next step,
surplus
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of
syngas
is going to a heat recovery
steam
generator, where cool water is heated by hot exhaust fumes. After which,
steam
in pipes is flowed to a
steam
turbine to finish the
process
of energy generation in a generator, and transfer energy to
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electricity grid.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, syngas, steam with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Solar panels
  • Solar farms
  • Energy independence
  • Electricity bills
  • Environmental benefits
  • Weather conditions
  • Storage issues
  • Climate change
  • Technological advancements
  • Adoption
  • Sustainable
  • Implementation
  • Feasibility
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