Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games. What are the negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effects?

At
this
time
many people have wide internet access and because of that a large number of
children
play
computer
games
.
Computer
games
cause addiction in teenagers and harm
children
's health and body . Preventing
such
things can help improve the situation.
This
addition in teenagers on computers could be attributed to two primary reasons.
First,
many
children
become addicted to computers since their parents don't spend
time
with their kids or
children
are missing something in real life and kids find something that they spend their energy
,
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for example
, online
games
. Statically, 39
percent
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per cent
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of teenagers are addicted to
computer
games
, mostly boys 23
percent
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. In
the
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online
games
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children
find online friends and attention from other gamers.
Secondly
, when
children
play
games
they can pretend to be anyone and they like it more than real life. In real life at school or at home they feel uncomfortable. There are two solutions to
this
problem.
Firstly
, their parents must limit their
children
from the
computer
.
For instance
, the limit of
time
, kids can use gadgets or computers only one or two hours a day, perhaps it can give more effects.
Moreover
,
children
need to be distracted and enrolled in extracurricular activities like
,
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chess, math, swimming,
tennis
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and tennis
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. Chiefly, it not only helps to distract but
also
allows
children
to learn new skills and can apply
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their future. In conclusion, frequently spending
time
on the
computer
can cause addiction
due to
these actions and have a negative effect on
children
's health and their body.
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