The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now, and plan for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now, and plan for its development.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These two maps illustrate the current layout of the town
islip
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and the forecast of how it will look in the future.
Overall
, the town will change considerably with increasing the number of leisure facilities and housing. One change, that stands out is that the main
road
will be redeveloped
with
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introducing a new dual carriageway roundabout
road
and replacing
to
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a pedestrians’ path in the middle.
Besides
, there will be erected a bus station, a shopping centre and a car park for customers to accommodate cars,
instead
of old shops on the north side of the current main
road
.
However
, shops to the south of the current
road
still will be there. Another noticeable thing is that
,
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there will be built new housing for citizens near the old ones,
although
school
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schools
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and decreased
park
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parks
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can be seen in the same places.
Moreover
, new housing will be constructed on the south side of
new
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the new
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road
.
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