The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now, and plan for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
These two maps illustrate the current layout of the town
islip
and the forecast of how it will look in the future.
Change the capitalization
Islip
Overall
, the town will change considerably with increasing the number of leisure facilities and housing.
One change, that stands out is that the main road
will be redeveloped with
introducing a new dual carriageway roundabout Change preposition
by
road
and replacing to
a pedestrians’ path in the middle. Change preposition
apply
Besides
, there will be erected a bus station, a shopping centre and a car park for customers to accommodate cars, instead
of old shops on the north side of the current main road
. However
, shops to the south of the current road
still will be there.
Another noticeable thing is that,
there will be built new housing for citizens near the old ones, Remove the comma
apply
although
school
and decreased Fix the agreement mistake
schools
park
can be seen in the same places. Fix the agreement mistake
parks
Moreover
, new housing will be constructed on the south side of new
Add an article
the new
a new
road
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