Robots‌ ‌can‌ ‌free‌ ‌people‌ ‌from‌ ‌difficult‌ ‌and‌ ‌dangerous‌ ‌work.‌ ‌However,‌ ‌some‌ ‌people‌ ‌are‌ ‌worried‌ ‌about‌ ‌the‌ ‌possible‌ ‌dangers‌ ‌robots‌ ‌may‌ ‌create. Discuss‌ ‌the‌ ‌benefits‌‌ ‌of‌ ‌using‌ ‌robots‌ ‌and‌ ‌the‌ ‌‌possible‌ ‌dangers‌‌ ‌from‌ ‌it.‌ ‌

while
some
people
assume that
robots
can free humans from difficult and dangerous work, others suppose it can be hazardous. In
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I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using
robots
. on the one hand,
firstly
, work which
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hard for
people
and
people
can feel exhausted,
robots
can do it easily, without getting tired,
additionally
as far as I am to
judge
robots
can be our friends. for ,example there are many
people
who have complexes and for ,
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it is pretty hard to tell something, they are afraid of telling their own opinions because they believe that no one will support them or
people
will laugh at them, and in my opinion
robots
can be helpful in
this
case, they will never
judge
or laugh at
people
and
people
will feel free to communicate, which I find is magnificent. on the other ,hand they indeed can be dangerous, for ,instance if
people
will be unable to control them as far as I am to
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our planet will be hell, they can do anything they want to do, and no one can stop them, and if what I have mentioned would happen in my opinion it would be the end of the world and the end of the humanity. in conclusion, even though it has many benefits, it without question has its disadvantages, and as far as I am able to
judge
it would be much better if we do not risk our lives and do not create any
robots
.
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