In some countries ,a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In many

countries

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people

able

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are able

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to get

high

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a high

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range of wages and some individuals think it is good for those

countries

,

whereas

some argue with

this

statement and trust that the administration should restrict the

amount

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of salaries. I think higher payment is good

to

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for

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the country'

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country' s

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country's

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development.

To begin

with,

some

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in some

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countries

employee' s salary is extreme level because of high wages

those

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in those

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countries

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countries'

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employees are ready to do overtime work .

In addition

to

this

, it increases industrial welfare.

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, China gives high payment to their

worker

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that

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is why they stand at the highest position in economic development.

Secondly

, it removes

country's

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the country's

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unemployment problems. As a few

country

's company

owner

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owners

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pays high money,

younger

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the younger

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public

are

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getting

interest

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in work.

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, younger individuals can meet up their daily

demand

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demands

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and can lead the family

budget

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to budget

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properly for

higher

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a higher

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salary

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salaries

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.

However

, my opinion is that the authority should encourage the

mills

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owner to increase

monetary

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the monetary

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fund

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.

Moreover

, it can remove poverty and can develop economic background.

For instance

, America set at the poor free

country

as well as

economical

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the economical

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establishment. For

this

,

government

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the government

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have to focus on

industrial

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the industrial

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sector and

also

payment method In conclusion, the government should give extreme wages which will bring goodwill

for

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poor people and younger people .

Moreover

, it

help

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to remove

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the country'

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country'

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country's

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unemployment problem and poverty condition.