These days university studies cost a lot.Is this positive development or negative?

University education costs a huge sum of money these days.

For

this

reason

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many

youth

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are not choosing to continue their studies at higher institutions. In my opinion, it was

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right decision to render it paid

due to

the lack of funding,

redundant

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quantity of job seekers and easy access to

higher

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degree

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that might happen

otherwise

. Educational establishments must possess essential tools,

equipments

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,

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facilities to provide

students

with the best experience possible. Unless the budget is provided by the government, universities solely can't deal with

this

.

However

authorities have a lot to care about,

apparently

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they cannot afford to sponsor all

students

.

This

will lead to bare-bones conditions caused by the lack of funding which in the other case would

compensated

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by

students

' payment. With

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majority of

population

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having degrees from universities, there will be a high demand

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employment resulting in

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strong competition among applicants. By no means, authorities and private companies will be able to fit them all. Some may argue that without having to pay

students

will not have to work full or part-time

job

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thus

leaving more time to focus on their studies.

Nevertheless

, I do not agree with

this

point as

students

start to underestimate the effortless availability of education. People value things as long as they have to pay for them.

To conclude

, I believe that universities must stay fee-paying for everybody as it will result in deterioration of the

overall

condition of the establishment, increased unemployment rates and taking the free stuff for granted.