You are shifting out of your accommodation. You think the place is suitable for your English speaking colleague who is arriving next month. Write a letter to your colleague- - explain why you are shifting out. - Describe your accommodation - Why is it suitable for your friend?

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Dear Sam, I hope you and your family are doing well. I just got your letter and am excited to see that you are coming back to Toronto the next month.

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, I am

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changing my house and moving to Windsor.

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month, I do not have any plans to shift but the reason is my wife got a job at the General Hospital in Windsor. It is difficult for her to commute daily by public transport as Windsor is almost 400km away from Toronto. I know you are looking for accommodation . I feel that my current is the best location for you because it is close to your job.

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, public facilities like grocery stores, banks and shops are not very far from

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location. Public transportation is available 24 hours and the bus stop is in front of the house. I would like to tell you about the house in which we have 2 bedrooms, one bathroom and a kitchen. There is a small lawn at the backside of the home to enjoy weekend or evening time with neighbours. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Nick Jones

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You are shifting out of your accommodation. You think the place is suitable for your English speaking colleague who is arriving next month. Write a letter to your colleague- - explain why you are shifting out. - Describe your accommodation - Why is it suitable for your friend?

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In the developed world avarage life expectancy is increasing in modern life. Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging-population. What problem will this causefor individuals and society.

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Many people say the gap between rich and poor people is wider, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause and what measure can be done to address those problems?

Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion