The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
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The bar chart demonstrates the data of the survey where people are asked
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the usage of caffeine and tea on 3 different occasions in five municipalities of Australia in the previous month.
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, regarding the chart, 2 indexes show a higher trend.
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, going to a café ,especially for grabbing some beverages has almost the highest indicator in comparison with the remaining figures. Regarding the bar chart, the places of origin of the implemented survey are Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart. It is estimated navigation that upwards of 55 per
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of people go to the café in all cities except for Adelaide, where only half of its residents visit caffeine shops. The quantity of people who walk out for cappuccino and tea in that city is under 50 per
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compared to other cities, which is the trough. In terms of consumption of fresh espresso, indicators in all cities are under 45 per
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, in comparison, it accounted for the lowest figure among all three types of consumption. With regards to the usage of instant coffee, in the graph there is a fluctuation as there are its highest sales in Hobart, illustrating over a half and contrasting with the lowest point of under 45 per
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in Sydney.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee and tea buying habits
  • instant coffee
  • fresh coffee
  • cafe culture
  • social influences
  • economic factors
  • city demographics
  • seasonal trends
  • marketing strategies
  • consumer preferences
  • availability
  • popularity
  • consumption patterns
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