Question: some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discus both views and give your opinion

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is often argue

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the importance of

sports

as part of

school

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curriculum for young generations. It appears that there are some people who believe that it should be only optional.

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it will discuss the benefits and cons of the topic. On the one hand, there are various reasons why physical education should be

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part of

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the children

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children

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school

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.

Firstly

, there are some significant

lesson

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that children can learn

while

doing

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subject

such

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team cooperation, leadership and being

a good

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a good sport

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sports

. Which they can apply

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their daily life or future jobs.

Secondly

, doing

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helps kids to be fit and healthy. Running activities,

for instance

, is a great way to

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weight.

Lastly

, we all know that not all students are meant to be clever in

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primary subjects. There

are

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chance some of them will excel more in

sports

. It means

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can be the chance that their teacher can discover their talent and help them succeed

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it.

Conversely

, there are some opponents of

sports

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part

in

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children

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curriculum

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. They believe that

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should focus on major school subjects

such

as Math, Science and English.

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the

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reason

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are

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the subjects that

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can help us to excel in

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future job.

In addition

, they think that Physical education is just a waste

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and they rather use their time reading books and revising. Another negative of doing

sport

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is it can be an additional expense for the parents. Having additional

uniform

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for the class and

their

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is a chance of buying some

sports

equipments

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which can burden the tight budget of

familes

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families

. In conclusion, I believe that the advantages of

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subject

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in schools outweigh the disadvantages. There are various benefits and unforgettable

experience

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experiences

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that a kid will remember forever.