Many things that use to be done in the home by hand are now being done by the machines. Does development bring more advantages or disadvantages?
People are increasingly using modern equipment to fulfil their requirements which were done by hand in the past
as a result
of the rapid growth of modern technology. In Linking Words
this
essay, I will discuss the benefits Linking Words
as well as
drawbacks of the usage of modern machinery from both perspectives of the individual and the community.
These days, the majority of day-to-day activities are done by apparatus because they are time-saving. If any task completes within less period than its normal hour Linking Words
due to
the usage of modern equipment, productivity is automatically increased. Another thing I would like to emphasize is that tasks can be achieved by using minimum manpower. Linking Words
For example
, it is easy to manage the daily chores of a family by themselves without a help of a maid. Increasingly usage of modern machinery for each and every process might be helpful to boost productivity and Linking Words
this
involvement is time-saving.
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On the other hand
, there are several disadvantages to the aforementioned view. Linking Words
Firstly
, those machines are expensive Linking Words
as well as
highly energy-consuming. Linking Words
Therefore
, people who use those items must earn more money to maintain those sophisticated machines. Linking Words
Secondly
, there is a risk of increasing unemployment in several job categories mostly blue-collar jobs. The replacement of apparatus for human activities causes to rise in environmental pollution Linking Words
as well as
disappear some jobs in several fields.
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To conclude
, time-saving and improving productivity Linking Words
as well as
less manpower requirement Linking Words
instead
of doing by hand. Linking Words
Conversely
, modern items are considerably expensive and energy consuming which causes increasing environmental pollution as well. Linking Words
Moreover
, it helps to increase unemployment in some job fields.Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...