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You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the company. In your letter · give the details of the flight · explain what the problem with the food was · say what the airline should do about it. Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the
flight
 meal that I ate on my
last
 journey. My
flight
 number was CI071 which departed from Taiwan to Vancouver on the 17th of July, 2023, and my seat was A26.
Also
, the boarding time of
this
flight
 was eleven am in the morning, and it took twelve hours to arrive at the destination. During lunchtime, one female
flight
 attendant inquired about my lunch selection based on the menu, and I chose a bow of tomato-sauce pasta. After tasting the food, I found out that it was too salty, so I request another dish.
However
, the servant did not accept my offer, so I was so depressed. I would like to propose some suggestions regarding the airline meals.
Firstly
, I believe that the chef should adjust the recipe and reduce the salt quantity because most modern customers expect a healthy and balanced meal during their trip.
Secondly
, I would like to ask for a coupon to compensate for my unhappy experience. I look forward to receiving your response. Yours faithfully, Claire Chen
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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