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the bar chart illustrates the percentage of
divorce
in two European countries (Finland
and Sweden
) over a five years period between 2011 and 2015.
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rate in Sweden
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Finland
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Sweden
was 42%.In 2012, Sweden
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Sweden's
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year .In 2013 and 2014 Sweden
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were around 50% and more than 40%,whereas
the rates
of Finland
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